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Alison Bull's avatar

Love this.

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thanks Alison, that's nice of you to say

John L. Clemente's avatar

I like this one, as it's a little more concrete in subject matter! The familiar quote from Helen of Troy is a nice touch!

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thank you Johnny boy 👦

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I had to start somewhere, probably saw a really beautiful girl and went with it

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I sent you something by Thomas Babington, called Iv'ry

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I like Robert Browning, there's something plain and relatable in his work.

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the starting line is sorta copied from that Greek poem about Helen of Troy

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Rob Riley's avatar

Marlowe?..I should Google it. I was working at a site in a beach town on Long Island, Long Beach I think, it was hot, and I just couldn't help noticing the people buzzing around in the heat, etc..